• Agrivar@lemmy.worldEnglish
    2·
    1 year ago

    maybe you wanna try another round of editing? still reads like gibberish to my eyes…

    • MandyEnglish
      14·
      1 year ago

      At this point its not my fault anymore my dude or dudette

      Sounds pretty coherent to me

      • VulKendov@reddthat.comEnglish
        1·
        1 year ago

        I understood it, only change I’d make now is ‘woman’ to ‘women’.

        Edit: also missed a ‘get’ between ‘can’t’ and ‘enough’.