Lacanoodle@literature.cafe to Aneurysm Posting@sopuli.xyz · 4 days agoCan you?literature.cafeimagemessage-square13fedilinkarrow-up146arrow-down123
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minus-squareTheAlbatross@lemmy.blahaj.zonelinkfedilinkarrow-up43arrow-down2·4 days agoThis reads fine? It could use some commas but otherwise makes sense
minus-squareDrusas@fedia.iolinkfedilinkarrow-up5arrow-down1·4 days agoFor some of us, the lack of commas does make it hard to read.
minus-squareArthur Besse@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkarrow-up4arrow-down6·4 days agowhere would commas go to make it make sense? 🤔
minus-squareTheAlbatross@lemmy.blahaj.zonelinkfedilinkarrow-up26·4 days agoAlright, it needs some other punctuation, too, but that’s not so bad. I’m raising my kids by “if you have anything nice to say, say it” and “if you have anything nice you can do, do it”.
minus-squareArthur Besse@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkarrow-up4·4 days agoi read it twice and somehow didn’t notice the word “do” appears twice 🤡
minus-squareTheAlbatross@lemmy.blahaj.zonelinkfedilinkarrow-up2·4 days agoLmao that’ll do it! And demonstrates why OP coulda used some punctuation
This reads fine? It could use some commas but otherwise makes sense
For some of us, the lack of commas does make it hard to read.
where would commas go to make it make sense? 🤔
Alright, it needs some other punctuation, too, but that’s not so bad.
I’m raising my kids by “if you have anything nice to say, say it” and “if you have anything nice you can do, do it”.
i read it twice and somehow didn’t notice the word “do” appears twice 🤡
Lmao that’ll do it!
And demonstrates why OP coulda used some punctuation
That’ll do do it!