Prosecutors have charged a Metropolitan Police officer with murder after he shot rapper Chris Kaba in London last year.

    • meseek #2982@lemmy.ca
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      1 year ago

      Comma would be weird; there’s no pause, for example: “he shot dead a heard of cattle”. It all flows as one line.

      If you want to fix it, just ad an “an”:

      “London Cop Who Shot Dead An Unarmed Black Man Charged With Murder”. Which is typically how the saying is used. If you want a comma, I’d add it after “man”.

      But I’m not a literary professor or anything.

      • zaph
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        1 year ago

        About 10 seconds after I submitted the comment I realized my error and deleted it lol