• CoolMatt@lemmy.ca
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    8 months ago

    Do you think in this example the elipsis should’ve been a comma instead, or it works just fine the way it is?

    I couldn’t help but read it as she lost track of what she was talking about mid sentence, then finally after the fog lifted, remembered the rest of what she was saying.