• Crashumbc@lemmy.world
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    2 months ago

    While this is writing, it’s not formal, it’s a marketing ad directed less than savvy want to be entrepreneurs… It’s meant to be sales speech.

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      2 months ago

      Right, and a sales speech should be somewhat formal. It’s not like an essay or legal appeal, but it should be a lot more formal than a discussion at a backyard BBQ or whatever.

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        2 months ago

        I don’t know. I think it gets the point that the writer is a marketing or sales idiot across quite clearly if the grammar is bad too.