Do i missed anything HAHA?

  • betterdeadthanreddit@lemmy.world
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    1 year ago

    That’s a lot of words without much in the way of focus. To me, it reads like an attempt to pack as many likely search terms into a single article as possible. Giving every paragraph its own bold header is an interesting choice as well. If you’re going to write “…a blog post detailing how [a recent government hack] occurred”, it would make sense to write a blog post that focuses on a recent government hack as well as the details of how it occurred. As it is now, this appears to be something between a glossary of common terms, a collection of blog post titles and ideas along with a section containing the start of four case studies which could be a decent stand-alone article using this blog post’s current title if fleshed out.

    The Q&A section of the site could use a little proofreading as well but that’s beside the point.

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      1 year ago

      This is clickbait. No serious intelligence analyst would read this

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      1 year ago

      Thanks soo much about feedback i will continue posting here about my posts and continue improving