Having watched a bit, I’d recommend much like the other guy said at least a bit of editing like an arrow pointing at the thing you’re talking about whenever you need to (grass above rat that the rat trampled) instead of trying to explain for unnecessarily long.

And ideally consistently do the things you show people as tricks, i.e. throwing your ration to open a door, carefully dancing through grass.

Also an early tip would be to just have a notes app open and write down which potions/scrolls you found where (floor, room type) which makes for much easier identification, as you don’t need to rely on memory. You can also note not-yet-solved puzzle rooms etc.