• dangrousperson@feddit.org
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      2 days ago

      Translation: Even if your bowels are ripping, never go break shitting.

      I tried to keep the rhyme, even if the English translation isn’t grammaticaly correct.

      • itslilith@lemmy.blahaj.zone
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        1 day ago

        Maybe “even if your bowels are ripping, never in the break go shitting”?

        It’s still a bit clunky, but the meter works and the grammar is technically correct I think, even if an inversion is unconventional