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Federico Garcia Lorca, 1922 The moon goes over the water. How tranquil the sky is! She goes scything slowly the old shimmer from the river; meanwhile a young frog takes her for a little mirror.
minus-square@goatlinkEnglish2•1 year agoSo you into analysing creative writing and such? If so, would you perhaps like to criticise mine? trying to write a book c:
minus-squarebakerOPMlinkEnglish2•1 year agoI certainly am into that; but depending on your book’s subject I might not be best-suited to criticize it! e.g. I don’t read very much fiction, so while I’m a hell of a proofreader I wouldn’t necessarily make a great editor for a novel lol
minus-square@goatlinkEnglish1•1 year agoOh not asking you to edit, just your experience as a reader is all
So you into analysing creative writing and such? If so, would you perhaps like to criticise mine? trying to write a book c:
I certainly am into that; but depending on your book’s subject I might not be best-suited to criticize it!
e.g. I don’t read very much fiction, so while I’m a hell of a proofreader I wouldn’t necessarily make a great editor for a novel lol
Oh not asking you to edit, just your experience as a reader is all
Sure, lay it on me!